Yes! Thanks! >_< I did use reference though ^_^;;;
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One thing that confused me was his mouth, it took me a bit to realize he was growl-y. ... But then, I am still half asleep so my perception ma be a bit off.
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You are getting alot better at the coloring, I must say. And the color-pallet fits the mood of the picture well.
Critique wise, I think you need to pay more attention to the poses and expressions. D\'s(not going to attempt to speel his name) expression doesn\'t make a lot of sense placement wise, its to low on the face and more of his mouth should be open, not just that little corner. Helena\'s pose is rathe confusing, because it looks like she\'s standing which makes no sense depth wise.
Does that help? ^__^;;;*doesn\'t want to sound like a jerk*
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his facial expression isn't that clear. his mouth looks weird...XP sorry. and Saisu pretty much said it all so i'm just going to affirm everything she said.
Yeah, Saisu. That's right...
There. I did it... Anyway, you're really getting better... Ah. I wish I could be there now watching you grow better as an anime artist. I've seen the beginnings (or close enough) and I want to see the continuations...
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you could use a little less crumpling on the shirt, maybe you can use a reference pic to see how much would work
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I heart
I did use reference though ^_^;;;
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Do you need something to burn?
Castigate? Criticize?
Not mindlessly... but with substance and style?
Then go see my underdeveloped drawings ^^
[link]
One thing that confused me was his mouth, it took me a bit to realize he was growl-y.
... But then, I am still half asleep so my perception ma be a bit off.
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"Hi, I'll have a Menos Grande, please."
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Do you need something to burn?
Castigate? Criticize?
Not mindlessly... but with substance and style?
Then go see my underdeveloped drawings ^^
[link]
Critique wise, I think you need to pay more attention to the poses and expressions. D\'s(not going to attempt to speel his name) expression doesn\'t make a lot of sense placement wise, its to low on the face and more of his mouth should be open, not just that little corner. Helena\'s pose is rathe confusing, because it looks like she\'s standing which makes no sense depth wise.
Does that help? ^__^;;;*doesn\'t want to sound like a jerk*
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It's an interesting feeling...
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A wise man knows that we are all stupid and lazy, a wiser man spends their life trying to over come it and does not accept it as a limitation. Bite that.
If I don't add you back, tell me so that I can fix it!
--
Do you need something to burn?
Castigate? Criticize?
Not mindlessly... but with substance and style?
Then go see my underdeveloped drawings ^^
[link]
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Do you need something to burn?
Castigate? Criticize?
Not mindlessly... but with substance and style?
Then go see my underdeveloped drawings ^^
[link]
Yeah, Saisu. That's right...
There. I did it...
Anyway, you're really getting better...
Ah. I wish I could be there now watching you grow better as an anime artist. I've seen the beginnings (or close enough) and I want to see the continuations...
blargh.
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I seriously need my own scanner...
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